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:iconmrelementron-da:
Hello, this is my first time doing a critique, so be prepared for fails(s) in this one.

First of all, I had seen many artworks with a similar style as this. (Try out: MLP: Two Sides of [insert MLP character here]. Not that I'm trying to be mean but, the coloring and shading needs a LIITLE more practice. Try using the Burn tool thingy in GIMP and change the opacity to 90 and gently apply the shading, oh, and try using a font when applying text :)

Thank you for reading my VERY FIRST critique. Hope to see you improve! (In a positive way, of course..)
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ElRinaZuza Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It is real critique, at least quite adequate! Unfortunately it's too short from my point of view.
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MrElementron-dA Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, it IS really short though.
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ElRinaZuza Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I believe that you'll do something to make them bigger and bigger and bigger with every new one. It's goes only from practice.
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